In 21th century, there is a thing that takes up a large part of our routines like kakao talk, twitter and instargram. It is ‘facebook’. Although ‘facebook’ is likely to undermine depression or can become a place of communication, excessive concentration in facebook can bring results of aggravating depression or feeling sense of shame themselves. no one is better than doing suitablely. In the article, it is said that if we control excessive concentration ourselves, there must be good results.

여기서 문법 틀린거랑 어색한거 있으면 말 좀 해줘