what I'm struggling is..not just 100%accurate grammer but culture of the countries which spockes in English..T.T I'm staying in London now, but living in other country doesn't effect you that much especially when you are already 21years.. jumping into another culture is the most difficult one for me, I'm afraid.. 한글이 안 돼는 것은 아니지만..부끄러운 영어로 끄적거려 보았습니다..제 상태가 지금 이 정도다, 하고 하고요.ㅠㅠ 리스닝과 리딩은 어느정도 돼지만..역시 문법이 취약하다는 걸 절감하는 요즘입니다^^;
I understand how difficult it can be when you move to a new place. But you should try to be optimistic. You have an opportunity that others don't have. Once you start to appreciate your new experience, you will gain more out of it.
영어로 쓰시는 것 좋습니다. 부끄럽다니요. 계속 해보는 게 얼마나 중요한 연습인데요... kiss 영문법을 읽어보시고 가셨으면 더 좋았을텐데... 늦었을 때라고 생각될 때가 시작해야 될 때이기도 하죠. 힘내시고요, My Childhood 라는 글을 썼는데 한번 유심히 읽어보세요. 찾아서 곧 올리겠습니다.
Well.. At first time that I wrote English, I felt awkward.. but now, I don't feel ashamed to make mistakes.
I'm making out something which is about tourist attractions around Itaewon and Myungdong to send the highest level managers who are going to visit Korea. (이태원도 가본적 없는 나한테 이런걸 시키다니..ㅜ.ㅜ.. Stressed-out Joyce)
Have a nice weekend~!
I'm not sure if Itaewon would be the best choice for them. What about Minsokchon, Koex, or Insadong?
It's impressive that you're introducing Korea to the highest level managers. I'm proud that you're a reader of Kiss 영문법. We should definitely meet when I visit Korea.
Anyway, feel free to post your proposal (introduction) here. I'll take a look at it.
I showed your book to my student today. She said that the book looks really interesting. I think It can be helpful that we just read together. My student thinks you're humorous because of your American story that is written in your book. She asked me about you a few things but I couldn't answer because I also don't know about you.ㅋㅋ anyway, 쪼금 친한 것처럼 얘기했어요~괜찮죠?
Well, you're the sister of my friend, so I definitely feel close to you. Feel free to talk about me as you wish. And thanks for using my book as study book for your class. I hope it helps. ^^
Hello~ Long time no see(ㅋㅋ I didn't visit here for 3 days.^^) How have you been? oppa~ I have happy news.....Each of my students wants to have your book. When they read your book they felt like having a conversation with you. That's because of your asking method? (이상하지 않을까요, 아님 이렇게 한번 해보세요 같은거) anyway, I learn many things from your book. Thanks a lot. If I have a chance to meet you, I want to get your sign before you get more famous.^^
I had midterms this week. And the weather was so cold that I had a sore throat as well.
But the news you bring to me makes me so happy. I can't imagine small kids in a classroom all reading my book. It's surreal.
Oppa~ Anneonghasaeyo? you got a good student while I didn't visit here. I read 'pronouns part' this time. Especially the part that you explained a difference between who and whomever was really interesting.At that part, I had no problems with it. Just perfect! Of course, I knew that before but your explanation was more easier than other books.
If I find some distinguishable parts, I'll ask you without any hesitation. (Tell the truth, I had little hesitation before.)
See you~ Have a great day^^
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Thanks for your compliments. You should, however, ask any question when in doubt. Don't be afraid to challenge my explanations. I appreciate thoughtful questions.
I'm elementary school teacher. In English class, my student ask me. "귀여운 척, 잘난 척 할때 '~척'을 영어로 뭐라고 해요?" It's very simple. But I can't respond easily. So I ask you proper word in that situation. Now I can do explanation to her. Thanks.^^
Hi Mr. Kim,
A few people who write on the guest book are English teachers. It's exciting to know that English teachers are reading my book.
It's great that your students are encouraged to ask you questions. When I went to school in Korea, I was so afraid of my teachers that I never talked to them.
Feel free to ask me anything. And it'd be great if you could recommend my book to your students.
I went to camp on last week, Tuesday. We went to the Botarnic Garden which is full of fresh air. The plants and trees were wonderful! We ate lunch there and then we watched many animals in the zoo. We went to bed after BBQ dinner. Next morning, we had breakfast and it was cornflake with milk and we came to the school. I really enjoyed that camp~! Hi teacher~! Could you check my writing, please? Today is Easter day, have a nice holiday~! he he he...*^^*
Hi Roy,
You're my youngest reader so I don't want to hurt your feelings but I usually don't revise others' writings. Once I start doing that, too many people will ask for the same favor. But I'll do it once--just for you. I actually went to your minihompy and realized that you're a boy full of wit. I like that. Also, I've seen your father's writing and I now know that you and your sister went to a foreign country to study. (Is it New Zealand?) I hope you take this precious opportunity to learn English well and expand your horizon as a young man. By the way, I'm curious if your father sent my book to you.
Well, here's what I think about what you wrote.
I went to camp on last week, Tuesday. ==> Good capitalization! But you could just write, "I went to camp last Tuesday." If a shorter sentence has the same meaning as another sentence, the shorter sentence is usually better, as in this case.
You used the pronoun, "we." But who are you talking about?
Next morning, we had breakfast and it was cornflake with milk and we came to the school. ==> Carefully read KISS 영문법. You'll realize that "the school" is incorrect in this case. It's better to write this sentence as such: After we had cornflakes for breakfast, we came to school.
Yes, it is Easter Day. I wish you a nice holiday too. Feel free to write about your daily activities, but it would be difficult for me to revise your writings from now on. I don't revise for others. But I'll certainly write back to you.
Hi I’m Kim from Korea, 29, working for a conglomerate company in Seoul, I admire your works and your passion for teaching. I do not know who you are, but I feel something that you have a certain idea that I love to see English and the speakers, especially native teachers, in Korea. Even though I’ve never been abroad for the language of English, I am using that tool of communication everyday in my office in Seoul, without terrified of making mistakes before foreigners. I’m going to buy your book tomorrow- sorry I did not know your book until know. I must have purchased that, if I had known, I've heard the outstanding explanation in your book. Anyway I love to see that Korean people speaking English proudly whether fluently or not, and I do want to make even a little contribution for that. I wish to see great results from your workings and I am buying your book, and then asking tricky(?) questions to you, so plz get yourself ready for that..^^::
Hello Mr. Kim,
It's my pleasure to meet you and have you as my reader. It's interesting that you use English in your office everyday. You're a man with guts.
My book emphasizes on reducing grammatical mistakes so I cannot entirely endorse the idea of "speaking with no shame." I belong to the "speak carefully, but surely" school of thought. ^^; But of course, I respect your point of view.
It might be a good idea to write less, but give more thoughts into it. That's what I teach to my students. You're welcome to ask tricky questions as long as it's related to my book. I'll help you understand what I've written in my book.
ps: It'd be great if you could recommend my book--if you like it--to your co-workers. The book is not selling well despite my efforts. You probably know a lot more about sales than I do. I need your help.
Let's talking about my thinking to your question. After I graduate the university, i don't think I'm going to enter a company. My final goal is to be a hotel whole manager. To be a hotel whole manager, I wish to prefer entering a company to taking over a hotel. so. during I study at university, I am not only studying hard, but also making a money. I'll not use the knowlege I was taught for a point. I will use the knowledge for my business. For example, I'll manage a bar, a motel, a family restaurant, a pension or Internet shopping mall. Gradually, saving money, finally I wish to take over a hotel. As this method, I'll make a leading hotel whole manager.
-_- p.s Please. check a my bad sentence.
Hey Changhyuk,
So, it seems that you want to become a hotelier. That's a nifty job. I don't know how many times my goal has changed, but each time it has changed, it was always for the better. So my advice is to keep your eyes wide open and think of yourself as a multi-talented person. Sometimes people confine themselves too much with their dreams. You're young and that's an ability all by itself.
Well, unfortunately, I don't revise sentences for my readers. But I'll say that I see some basic grammar mistakes, which means that you should read the Basic Grammar part of KISS 영문법 a few times. For example, you can fix "check a my bad sentence" by rereading my book.
One mistake people often make is that they write too much and then ask for help or try to fix the problem. Practice writing a few perfect sentences rather than writing a whole paragraph. Then you'll have a clearer vision of what your problems are.
Thank you for your teaching. It was helpful for me. I have been studying in Australia for 1year. You're right, my father sent me a lovely "KISS 영문법" 1month ago. I'll improve my English skills through "KISS 영문법". I think this book is really good. Bye~~SeeeYaaa~!
Hi Roy,
I've never been to Australia but I have a few Aussie friends. They always crack me up.
It's quite touching to learn that your father has indeed sent my book. Send him my regards.
So, what's your favorite Australian dish? I'm addicted to NY hamburgers. Have you had a kangaroo burger yet?
ps: Instead of "Thank you for your teaching," think about "Thanks for teaching me" or "Thank you for the lesson" or "Thanks for your advice." Not that what you wrote is wrong, but I'm just informing you of other (probably better) options.
But I love that you wrote "I have been studying in Australia for one year." A perfect sentence is precious.
Hi, I'm Won and now Im in America as a foreign exchange student. While Im staying here, I realized that grammer is very important for not only speaking but also writing. My brother sent me your grammer book and that helped me summarize grammer that Ive learned so far. Thank you. If you don't mind, can I ask you some questions when I have?
Hi Won,
It's great that you came to America as an exchange student. You're saving a lot of money.
I'm flattered to learn that your brother has sent my book from Korea. A large portion of my readers are Koreans who study abroad.
And of course I don't mind at all about questions related to my book. In fact, I offer 100% a/s service--first for an English book in the world--and I explain until you fully understand what I've written in my book.
You're more than welcome to leave comments of any kind on my guest book. My readers enjoy writing about themselves and I encourage that practice.
I'm in NYC. Where in America are you? How are you liking it so far?
Thank you for your advice. I realized that unconditionally what I need your help isn't right. so, I decide to read the Basic Grammar part of KISS 영문법 harder. when I studied your book. I have felt that this book is suitable to me. So, I'm excited to study the book. I think it's up to me that my English skill is getting better. I do my best. hm.. May I have a question? Does your university have rowing team as a club ? Because I joined rowing team in my university's club. so, I have such a question. I'm attracted by rowing team abroad.
Yes, Columbia University has a rowing team and they are well respected. Our school is near a river so they often practice there. I had no idea that H.U.F.S. had a rowing team. That's fascinating. How often do you practice in water?
"I realized that unconditionally what I need your help isn't right" ==> I realized that unconditionally asking for your help isn't right. ^^; How about that?
Also, you make capitalization mistakes. Such mistakes seem small, but repeating such mistakes is a matter of ability, not attention.
The rowing team in H.U.F.S has had a tradition for fifty years. Generally, we called rowing team's member crew. Our crew assembled ourselves in 미사리 rowing groud on every weekend as possible as we can. We had participation in the rowing tournament Navy's Military Academy held in 2005. And, though we participated in amateur race, we came in fourth in the race. Rowing is attractive sports. Because, rowing need not only individual ability, but also a spirit of cooperation. The crew should row without a break for two kilometers. If I didn't join the rowing team in University's club, I have never gotten on the expensive boat. That's a valuable memory to me. Also, joining the rowing team, I got a valuable people. So, my cyworld has many picture of the rowing. If you might interest in rowing, I can go with you to 미사리 rowing ground. ^0^ kkk
Yes, a rowing team is also called a crew team. Being involved in a team sports is great. You must have awesome abs.
Row out to the world. I see a bright future ahead of you.
Hi. I am a student who is living in VA. I have been here for one and half years but i have some problems in gramma. While I was looking for some fresh news about the grammar, i fortunately found you. Actually, I tried to order "Kiss 영문법" via Interpark.co.kr, but it costs me around $20 only for shipping... I wonder if you have some extra books in your apartment or somewhere else. If that so, could you send that to me here VA? I will pay not only for your books but your kindness and shipping, also. I hope to hear from you a.s.a.p and have a great day...^^;; you and i have the same time here in EST... good night
Here's the news delivered ASAP. Yikes! It's 3:40 am, and I'm still writing a manuscript for some other book.
Thanks for your interest in KISS 영문법. I don't understand this phenomenon, but readership from abroad is increasing. I'm flattered. But definitely do not buy my book if you're going to be charged $20 for shipping. Unfortunately, I do not have extra copies of my book; I only have one for myself. I'm sorry that I can't help you out.
But feel free to write on this guest book. Usually, only readers are welcomed. However, under the circumstances I'll make an exception.
If you're in VA, you should know about 토시살. You're lucky to have easy access to it. And if you don't know what 토시살 is, ask around and someone will certainly know. It's too bad they only have it in VA. Yummie~
I read about the comment that saying won myung ordered KISS in Canada!! Why didnt i do like that? I should go to 한인책방 tomorrow..!! I hope that to get KISS in here, and I want to pay just $20... You got an opportunity to sell your book in foreign countries...lol... You should pay for us who buy your book out of korea!!
I think you heard about the tragedy on Monday in southern VA. It just crazy... you know... VT students, especially black, spit on korean students... But the worst thing is nobody can even try to fight with them... damn... What the heck is this? why do we have to avoid them?! I hate this kind of racial problems...--;;
Hey~
I worried about you when I saw the news. A girl I know was walking down the streets of New York and a big black man came up to her and said, "안녕하세요" in Korean. The girl walked away. The man followed her and asked if she was Korean; she said she was not.
I warned her yesterday of random acts of violence. She thanked me and told me to be safe too. I am starting to hear stories of young Koreans being hassled by others. That's why I wrote what I wrote. I hope you be safe too.
The point is not to fight back but to make them understand that no Korean would agree to what has happened, and to make them understand it's not a racial problem. But the average Americans I know are not such understanding people.
Hmm... I'm not sure if I can endorse the idea of asking my readers overseas to purchase my book. But if you indeed want to read it, I'd be very happy with your decision.
Keep your chin up, and don't lose your focus. You came to America for a reason and I hope you succeed in achieving that purpose.
actaully cant type in krn.im at work. ;) i read 저자님의 글 in daum, haha it was so cool. anyways i've been in us for 4yrs and go to college in ny. i can write, read, and understand everything in english... but dunno y i dunt wanna speak english at all. wanna speak fluently *sigh* im kinda embrassing to speak eng. :( do u have any idea?
Hey~ I think you're the first New Yorker to write here besides those whom I know. Nice to meet you. Isn't it a perfect day for a suntan? If you see a shirtless Asian man in Central Park who should definitely not have his shirt off--that'd be me. Huhu~
Learning to speak English is the most personal learning experience among the language principles: speaking, reading, writing, and listening. A person from the ghetto speaks like a person from the ghetto because of his or her life experiences. Likewise, a WASP speaks like a WASP because of his or her upbringing. Of course, this is not always the case, but it's usually the case.
The best way for Koreans in Korea to learn English speaking is to have a good role model--my new book will serve that purpose. The best way for Koreans in America to learn English speaking is to have a good role model--smart and talkative friends who use proper English while having an intuitive, as well as academic, understanding of how to teach English. But for either case, I think learning how to speak English directly from me is the best choice. Unfortunately, I don't tutor in America.
So the answer is... get a good book or talkative friend. Good luck!
oh my god! @a@ suddenly you use the english, i'm so surprised~~~~^_^ today the book will be arrived. l'm excited too much now!!!!
p.s. I have a question!!! when we write the english name, which is correct?? - Park mi na? or -Park Mi Na?? and Please correct my english sentence if it is wrong. thank you^_^ㅎ
아.. 그때 학교에서 댓글 다느라 영어로 쓴 것입니다. 그래도 영어로 쓰셨으니 저도 영어로 답변을 달도록 하겠습니다 (이것이 방명록 원칙이죠).
I think Mina is the best choice for your English name. If you give a space between mi and na, some would pronunciate as "마이... 나." Spelling it as Mi Na is confusing and mi-na looks clunky.
I don't revise what people write in English. I see four mistakes, and all four mistakes have been addressed in my book. If I revised yours, it would be difficult for me to refuse similar requests from others. Sorry about this.
But if you continue to write in English--you should--I will give you valuable advice one day. In the meantime, I hope you carefully read my book.
어느 영어 책 저자가 영어로 쓴 댓글들.
여러분이 영어로 쓰면 저도 영어로 답변 합니다.
한국어로 방명록 쓰신 분들은 반드시 영어로도 적어도 한 번은 써보시기 바랍니다.
여러분이 영어로 쓴 글을 교정해 주는 경우는 없지만 (그러면 모두 다 해줘야 할테니) 영어로 열심히 글을 쓰는 KISS 영문법 독자들에게는 반드시 언젠가 개인적으로 도움이 되는 조언을 해 줄 것이다.
* 질문은 까만색, 답변은 빨간색 *
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what I'm struggling is..not just 100%accurate grammer but culture of the countries which spockes in English..T.T I'm staying in London now, but living in other country doesn't effect you that much especially when you are already 21years.. jumping into another culture is the most difficult one for me, I'm afraid..
한글이 안 돼는 것은 아니지만..부끄러운 영어로 끄적거려 보았습니다..제 상태가 지금 이 정도다, 하고 하고요.ㅠㅠ
리스닝과 리딩은 어느정도 돼지만..역시 문법이 취약하다는 걸 절감하는 요즘입니다^^;
I understand how difficult it can be when you move to a new place. But you should try to be optimistic. You have an opportunity that others don't have. Once you start to appreciate your new experience, you will gain more out of it.
영어로 쓰시는 것 좋습니다. 부끄럽다니요. 계속 해보는 게 얼마나 중요한 연습인데요... kiss 영문법을 읽어보시고 가셨으면 더 좋았을텐데... 늦었을 때라고 생각될 때가 시작해야 될 때이기도 하죠. 힘내시고요, My Childhood 라는 글을 썼는데 한번 유심히 읽어보세요. 찾아서 곧 올리겠습니다.
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Hi.. How have you been doing?
mm.. I couldn't sleep well until 5 am ..because of my stubborn cold..
Fortunately today is a national holiday so I can take a rest at home..
Please be careful not to catch a cold!
Have a nice day..
Best wishes..
Joyce
I'm doing fine. Thanks. I have a cold too. A sore throat, to be exact.
I wish I could eat something hot and spicy.
By the way, don't keep your next posting a secret. You can encourage others to write in English as well.
Thanks for your encouragement~!
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Well.. At first time that I wrote English, I felt awkward.. but now, I don't feel ashamed to make mistakes.
I'm making out something which is about tourist attractions around Itaewon and Myungdong to send the highest level managers who are going to visit Korea.
(이태원도 가본적 없는 나한테 이런걸 시키다니..ㅜ.ㅜ.. Stressed-out Joyce)
Have a nice weekend~!
I'm not sure if Itaewon would be the best choice for them. What about Minsokchon, Koex, or Insadong?
It's impressive that you're introducing Korea to the highest level managers. I'm proud that you're a reader of Kiss 영문법. We should definitely meet when I visit Korea.
Anyway, feel free to post your proposal (introduction) here. I'll take a look at it.
Take care and have a nice weekend!
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I showed your book to my student today. She said that the book looks really interesting. I think It can be helpful that we just read together. My student thinks you're humorous because of your American story that is written in your book. She asked me about you a few things but I couldn't answer because I also don't know about you.ㅋㅋ anyway, 쪼금 친한 것처럼 얘기했어요~괜찮죠?
Well, you're the sister of my friend, so I definitely feel close to you. Feel free to talk about me as you wish. And thanks for using my book as study book for your class. I hope it helps. ^^
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Hello~ Long time no see(ㅋㅋ I didn't visit here for 3 days.^^) How have you been? oppa~ I have happy news.....Each of my students wants to have your book. When they read your book they felt like having a conversation with you. That's because of your asking method? (이상하지 않을까요, 아님 이렇게 한번 해보세요 같은거) anyway, I learn many things from your book. Thanks a lot. If I have a chance to meet you, I want to get your sign before you get more famous.^^
I had midterms this week. And the weather was so cold that I had a sore throat as well.
But the news you bring to me makes me so happy. I can't imagine small kids in a classroom all reading my book. It's surreal.
I really appreciate your help.
^^. Have a nice day~
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Oppa~ Anneonghasaeyo? you got a good student while I didn't visit here. I read 'pronouns part' this time. Especially the part that you explained a difference between who and whomever was really interesting.At that part, I had no problems with it. Just perfect! Of course, I knew that before but your explanation was more easier than other books.
If I find some distinguishable parts, I'll ask you without any hesitation. (Tell the truth, I had little hesitation before.)
See you~ Have a great day^^
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Thanks for your compliments. You should, however, ask any question when in doubt. Don't be afraid to challenge my explanations. I appreciate thoughtful questions.
Have a nice day!
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Hi~ Eu-gene.(Is this correct spell?)
I have a question.
For example,
as we say '귀여운 척, 예쁜 척, 잘난 척',
how do you say '~척' in English?
Hi~ My name is spelled out as it appears on the book.
~척 is "as if".
He acts as if he knows everything. She acts as if she's popular.
^^...
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I appreciate your answer.
I'm elementary school teacher.
In English class, my student ask me.
"귀여운 척, 잘난 척 할때
'~척'을 영어로 뭐라고 해요?"
It's very simple. But I can't respond easily.
So I ask you proper word in that situation.
Now I can do explanation to her. Thanks.^^
Hi Mr. Kim,
A few people who write on the guest book are English teachers. It's exciting to know that English teachers are reading my book.
It's great that your students are encouraged to ask you questions. When I went to school in Korea, I was so afraid of my teachers that I never talked to them.
Feel free to ask me anything. And it'd be great if you could recommend my book to your students.
Take care.
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I went to camp on last week, Tuesday. We went to the Botarnic Garden which is full of fresh air. The plants and trees were wonderful! We ate lunch there and then we watched many animals in the zoo. We went to bed after BBQ dinner. Next morning, we had breakfast and it was cornflake with milk and we came to the school. I really enjoyed that camp~!
Hi teacher~! Could you check my writing, please? Today is Easter day, have a nice holiday~! he he he...*^^*
Hi Roy,
You're my youngest reader so I don't want to hurt your feelings but I usually don't revise others' writings. Once I start doing that, too many people will ask for the same favor. But I'll do it once--just for you. I actually went to your minihompy and realized that you're a boy full of wit. I like that. Also, I've seen your father's writing and I now know that you and your sister went to a foreign country to study. (Is it New Zealand?) I hope you take this precious opportunity to learn English well and expand your horizon as a young man. By the way, I'm curious if your father sent my book to you.
Well, here's what I think about what you wrote.
I went to camp on last week, Tuesday. ==> Good capitalization! But you could just write, "I went to camp last Tuesday." If a shorter sentence has the same meaning as another sentence, the shorter sentence is usually better, as in this case.
You used the pronoun, "we." But who are you talking about?
Next morning, we had breakfast and it was cornflake with milk and we came to the school. ==> Carefully read KISS 영문법. You'll realize that "the school" is incorrect in this case. It's better to write this sentence as such: After we had cornflakes for breakfast, we came to school.
Yes, it is Easter Day. I wish you a nice holiday too. Feel free to write about your daily activities, but it would be difficult for me to revise your writings from now on. I don't revise for others. But I'll certainly write back to you.
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Hi I’m Kim from Korea, 29, working for a conglomerate company in Seoul, I admire your works and your passion for teaching. I do not know who you are, but I feel something that you have a certain idea that I love to see English and the speakers, especially native teachers, in Korea. Even though I’ve never been abroad for the language of English, I am using that tool of communication everyday in my office in Seoul, without terrified of making mistakes before foreigners. I’m going to buy your book tomorrow- sorry I did not know your book until know. I must have purchased that, if I had known, I've heard the outstanding explanation in your book. Anyway I love to see that Korean people speaking English proudly whether fluently or not, and I do want to make even a little contribution for that. I wish to see great results from your workings and I am buying your book, and then asking tricky(?) questions to you, so plz get yourself ready for that..^^::
Hello Mr. Kim,
It's my pleasure to meet you and have you as my reader. It's interesting that you use English in your office everyday. You're a man with guts.
My book emphasizes on reducing grammatical mistakes so I cannot entirely endorse the idea of "speaking with no shame." I belong to the "speak carefully, but surely" school of thought. ^^; But of course, I respect your point of view.
It might be a good idea to write less, but give more thoughts into it. That's what I teach to my students. You're welcome to ask tricky questions as long as it's related to my book. I'll help you understand what I've written in my book.
ps: It'd be great if you could recommend my book--if you like it--to your co-workers. The book is not selling well despite my efforts. You probably know a lot more about sales than I do. I need your help.
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Let's talking about my thinking
to your question.
After I graduate the university, i don't think I'm going to enter a company. My final goal
is to be a hotel whole manager.
To be a hotel whole manager, I wish to prefer
entering a company to taking over a hotel.
so. during I study at university, I am not only
studying hard, but also making a money.
I'll not use the knowlege I was taught for a
point. I will use the knowledge for my
business. For example, I'll manage a bar,
a motel, a family restaurant, a pension or
Internet shopping mall.
Gradually, saving money, finally I wish to take
over a hotel. As this method, I'll make a leading hotel whole manager.
-_- p.s Please. check a my bad sentence.
Hey Changhyuk,
So, it seems that you want to become a hotelier. That's a nifty job. I don't know how many times my goal has changed, but each time it has changed, it was always for the better. So my advice is to keep your eyes wide open and think of yourself as a multi-talented person. Sometimes people confine themselves too much with their dreams. You're young and that's an ability all by itself.
Well, unfortunately, I don't revise sentences for my readers. But I'll say that I see some basic grammar mistakes, which means that you should read the Basic Grammar part of KISS 영문법 a few times. For example, you can fix "check a my bad sentence" by rereading my book.
One mistake people often make is that they write too much and then ask for help or try to fix the problem. Practice writing a few perfect sentences rather than writing a whole paragraph. Then you'll have a clearer vision of what your problems are.
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Thank you for your teaching.
It was helpful for me.
I have been studying in Australia for 1year.
You're right, my father sent me a lovely
"KISS 영문법" 1month ago. I'll improve my English skills through "KISS 영문법". I think this book is really good. Bye~~SeeeYaaa~!
Hi Roy,
I've never been to Australia but I have a few Aussie friends. They always crack me up.
It's quite touching to learn that your father has indeed sent my book. Send him my regards.
So, what's your favorite Australian dish? I'm addicted to NY hamburgers. Have you had a kangaroo burger yet?
ps: Instead of "Thank you for your teaching," think about "Thanks for teaching me" or "Thank you for the lesson" or "Thanks for your advice." Not that what you wrote is wrong, but I'm just informing you of other (probably better) options.
But I love that you wrote "I have been studying in Australia for one year." A perfect sentence is precious.
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Hi, I'm Won and now Im in America as a foreign exchange student. While Im staying here, I realized that grammer is very important for not only speaking but also writing. My brother sent me your grammer book and that helped me summarize grammer that Ive learned so far. Thank you. If you don't mind, can I ask you some questions when I have?
Hi Won,
It's great that you came to America as an exchange student. You're saving a lot of money.
I'm flattered to learn that your brother has sent my book from Korea. A large portion of my readers are Koreans who study abroad.
And of course I don't mind at all about questions related to my book. In fact, I offer 100% a/s service--first for an English book in the world--and I explain until you fully understand what I've written in my book.
You're more than welcome to leave comments of any kind on my guest book. My readers enjoy writing about themselves and I encourage that practice.
I'm in NYC. Where in America are you? How are you liking it so far?
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Thank you for your advice.
I realized that unconditionally what I need
your help isn't right. so, I decide to read the
Basic Grammar part of KISS 영문법 harder.
when I studied your book. I have felt that
this book is suitable to me. So, I'm excited
to study the book. I think it's up to me that
my English skill is getting better. I do my best.
hm.. May I have a question?
Does your university have rowing team as
a club ? Because I joined rowing team in
my university's club. so, I have such a question. I'm attracted by rowing team abroad.
Yes, Columbia University has a rowing team and they are well respected. Our school is near a river so they often practice there. I had no idea that H.U.F.S. had a rowing team. That's fascinating. How often do you practice in water?
"I realized that unconditionally what I need your help isn't right" ==> I realized that unconditionally asking for your help isn't right. ^^; How about that?
Also, you make capitalization mistakes. Such mistakes seem small, but repeating such mistakes is a matter of ability, not attention.
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Hello. Today,Korea's weather is not good.-_-
The rowing team in H.U.F.S has had a tradition for fifty years. Generally, we called rowing team's member crew. Our crew assembled ourselves in 미사리 rowing groud on every weekend as possible as we can. We had participation in the rowing tournament Navy's Military
Academy held in 2005. And, though we participated in amateur race, we came in fourth in the race.
Rowing is attractive sports. Because, rowing need not only individual ability, but also a spirit of cooperation. The crew should row without a break for two kilometers. If I didn't join the rowing team in University's club, I have never gotten on the expensive boat. That's a valuable memory to me. Also, joining the rowing team, I got a valuable people.
So, my cyworld has many picture of the rowing. If you might interest in rowing, I can go with you to 미사리 rowing ground. ^0^ kkk
Yes, a rowing team is also called a crew team. Being involved in a team sports is great. You must have awesome abs.
Row out to the world. I see a bright future ahead of you.
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Hi. I am a student who is living in VA. I have been here for one and half years but i have some problems in gramma. While I was looking for some fresh news about the grammar, i fortunately found you. Actually, I tried to order "Kiss 영문법" via Interpark.co.kr, but it costs me around $20 only for shipping... I wonder if you have some extra books in your apartment or somewhere else. If that so, could you send that to me here VA? I will pay not only for your books but your kindness and shipping, also. I hope to hear from you a.s.a.p and have a great day...^^;; you and i have the same time here in EST... good night
Here's the news delivered ASAP. Yikes! It's 3:40 am, and I'm still writing a manuscript for some other book.
Thanks for your interest in KISS 영문법. I don't understand this phenomenon, but readership from abroad is increasing. I'm flattered. But definitely do not buy my book if you're going to be charged $20 for shipping. Unfortunately, I do not have extra copies of my book; I only have one for myself. I'm sorry that I can't help you out.
But feel free to write on this guest book. Usually, only readers are welcomed. However, under the circumstances I'll make an exception.
If you're in VA, you should know about 토시살. You're lucky to have easy access to it. And if you don't know what 토시살 is, ask around and someone will certainly know. It's too bad they only have it in VA. Yummie~
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I read about the comment that saying won myung ordered KISS in Canada!! Why didnt i do like that? I should go to 한인책방 tomorrow..!!
I hope that to get KISS in here, and I want to pay just $20...
You got an opportunity to sell your book in foreign countries...lol... You should pay for us who buy your book out of korea!!
I think you heard about the tragedy on Monday in southern VA. It just crazy... you know...
VT students, especially black, spit on korean students... But the worst thing is nobody can even try to fight with them... damn... What the heck is this? why do we have to avoid them?!
I hate this kind of racial problems...--;;
Hey~
I worried about you when I saw the news. A girl I know was walking down the streets of New York and a big black man came up to her and said, "안녕하세요" in Korean. The girl walked away. The man followed her and asked if she was Korean; she said she was not.
I warned her yesterday of random acts of violence. She thanked me and told me to be safe too. I am starting to hear stories of young Koreans being hassled by others. That's why I wrote what I wrote. I hope you be safe too.
The point is not to fight back but to make them understand that no Korean would agree to what has happened, and to make them understand it's not a racial problem. But the average Americans I know are not such understanding people.
Hmm... I'm not sure if I can endorse the idea of asking my readers overseas to purchase my book. But if you indeed want to read it, I'd be very happy with your decision.
Keep your chin up, and don't lose your focus. You came to America for a reason and I hope you succeed in achieving that purpose.
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actaully cant type in krn.im at work. ;)
i read 저자님의 글 in daum, haha it was so cool. anyways i've been in us for 4yrs and go to college in ny. i can write, read, and understand everything in english... but dunno y i dunt wanna speak english at all. wanna speak fluently *sigh* im kinda embrassing to speak eng. :( do u have any idea?
Hey~ I think you're the first New Yorker to write here besides those whom I know. Nice to meet you. Isn't it a perfect day for a suntan? If you see a shirtless Asian man in Central Park who should definitely not have his shirt off--that'd be me. Huhu~
Learning to speak English is the most personal learning experience among the language principles: speaking, reading, writing, and listening. A person from the ghetto speaks like a person from the ghetto because of his or her life experiences. Likewise, a WASP speaks like a WASP because of his or her upbringing. Of course, this is not always the case, but it's usually the case.
The best way for Koreans in Korea to learn English speaking is to have a good role model--my new book will serve that purpose. The best way for Koreans in America to learn English speaking is to have a good role model--smart and talkative friends who use proper English while having an intuitive, as well as academic, understanding of how to teach English. But for either case, I think learning how to speak English directly from me is the best choice. Unfortunately, I don't tutor in America.
So the answer is... get a good book or talkative friend. Good luck!
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^^;
oh my god! @a@
suddenly you use the english,
i'm so surprised~~~~^_^
today the book will be arrived.
l'm excited too much now!!!!
p.s. I have a question!!!
when we write the english name,
which is correct??
- Park mi na? or -Park Mi Na??
and Please correct my english sentence if
it is wrong. thank you^_^ㅎ
아.. 그때 학교에서 댓글 다느라 영어로 쓴 것입니다. 그래도 영어로 쓰셨으니 저도 영어로 답변을 달도록 하겠습니다 (이것이 방명록 원칙이죠).
I think Mina is the best choice for your English name. If you give a space between mi and na, some would pronunciate as "마이... 나." Spelling it as Mi Na is confusing and mi-na looks clunky.
I don't revise what people write in English. I see four mistakes, and all four mistakes have been addressed in my book. If I revised yours, it would be difficult for me to refuse similar requests from others. Sorry about this.
But if you continue to write in English--you should--I will give you valuable advice one day. In the meantime, I hope you carefully read my book.
Have a nice day~!
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