영어 번역한거좀 봐주세요

I'd like to tell you about myself

my name is 땡땡땡

I am 24 years old

my blood type is o-type

I ilke spicy food

I am very honest

when I am with my girlfriend, I am very happy

my girlfriend pretty

in my free time, i'd like to watch TV

무한도전 is my favorite TV program

my favorite gagman is 유재석

because he is funny

I sometimes listen to music

I feel good when I hear music

my dream idea is to be bussinesman

I have been able to succeed

I believe in myself

문법적으로 틀린게 없는지 한번 봐주시면안될까요 ㅠㅠ?