영어문법교정좀해주세요 (제발 내일8시까지해야해요)

soon2008.09.30
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과제 내일 8시까지 프린트해서 나가야합니다!!!!!!

제발 문법틀린것좀 교정해 주세요.

영어의 영자도 몰라서 뭐가틀린건지 모르겠네요.

대충쓰긴썼다만............

제발제발 도와주세요!!!!!!!!

 

 

My name is melinda petrson.

My Nick name is Mel. I like my nick name.

I am forty years old.

I live at Miami, Florida. Miami is famous about beautiful coastline. So from before, as the tourist resort called.

I love my hometown.

My English teacher is Mrs. Lee. Her description is nice and friendly. I like a English class most. Because I like English as usual.

My school name is South High School. School address is 1624 8th Avenue Northeast, Miami Florida. My school is big and colorful. I love go to school. By reason of my friend wait me. Even though my feel sleepy..