My future hope is the police and the person I want to be modeled on is Hong Gil-dong because they do a lot of good for us. To achieve this future hope, you must study hard. . 틀렷으면고쳐줘.
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My future hope is the police and the person I want to be modeled on is Hong Gil-dong because they do a lot of good for us. To achieve this future hope, you must study hard.
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틀렷으면고쳐줘.