내 영어실력 평가 좀 해줘.

2020.09.08
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내가 지금 쓰는 글은 그냥 내 생각을 써내려가는거야. 네이버파파고나 사전 참고 없이.그러니까 지금 내 실력 정도면 어느정도인지 평가 좀 해줘.마지막 다 쓰고 글쓴 시간까지 적을께.
About Politics.....
I don't think anybody should be fanatic about anything but, Some people like that are in Korea.
The most of people have been saying them about correct of the would but, They refused it.
So, I think It's unfortunate. I'm so frustrated that I couldn't have done anything.
I think they could get helped to others but, They have been resisting it and then
They want it that this government of Korea would get destroy. I think so.
Right before, I saw the news about president Moon. Others were speaking to president that get down your power and fun out of our country!
What the.....How can they say like that? huh? Can you understand it?
After I saw that, I'm feeling so bad and writing this.
Mr.Moon is our present president. So, Definitely we have to believe and follow him.


10분간 내 생각 그대로를 적었어용.
아직 초보인가요?
이 정도면 어느정도 영작 실력인가요?
그리고 수정해서 더 나아질 부분 있으면 조언 부탁해용ㅠ
고수 분들 답변 부탁 드립니다ㅠ