Disadvantages of living in a city

 I will tell you the disadvantages of living in a city. First, there are a lot of people in the city, so people will against each other for everything. They will become selfish people. Second, the cost of utilities is higher and very expensive. Third, they have to work harder. Fourth, the problem of traffic jam causes a busy-life style. Fifth, there are a lot of pollutions which come from factories, car and smoke. Sixth, the problems of pollution cause health problems. Seventh, there are a lot of bas entertainments that can deceive you a wrong way. Next, since there are a lot of buildings and rode, people who live in city will not familiar with natural. They might not be able to see or have some fresh food. In conclusion, there are numerous disadvantages of living in a city. I have just told you some of them.

Writing Enumerative Paragraphs는 제시된 주제에 관한

내용을 쫙 늘어뜨리는 글쓰기이다. 열거하는 글쓰기 정도?

학교 수업 때 들은 내용을 열거하자면 이런 것이다.

  You will tell on list the advantages / benefits of disadvantages of something or activities

  You don't tell the cause. But you must tell the results of doing or having it.

보통 주제에는

* Benefits of Taking Exercise

* Adventages of Having Mobile Phones

* Adventages of Having English Skills

* Disadvantages of Alchol consumption

*  Disadvantages of smoking

제일 중요한 writing topic sentence

 Don't limit the number of benefits or disadvantages of anything~블라블라

 Don't say!

 There are adveatage of - no!

 You are topic sentences can be various 

 ex : There are a lot of 블라블라

        It is good to take exercise.

        Smoking is hamful.

        I'll tell you the advantages of 블라블라

가장 중요한건 자기 스타일의 본인의 글을 쓰는 거겠죠!

어찌되었던 Writing Enumerative Paragraphs는 열거하는 글이란거.. 부족한 영어실력에 쓴거라 오타나 오류가있음

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