아래 작문한 거에서 틀린 거 있나봐주공... 고칠거있으면 얘기해주라ㅠㅠ

At the amusement park, the Chineses asked me to take pictures. I was worried because I didn't know Chinese. But the Chineses asked me to take pictures in English.  Chinese also spoke in English. I learned about the importance of English by looking at the Chineses. I found out that people in many countries use English. So I thought about how to speak English well.