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   If I were to be born again, I would prefer a boy than a girl. I have two reason for this opinion.

   First, a boy has less restriction on activity.

Nowadays, street crimes are increasing so many people are extremely concerned about them. In general, a girl should be more cautious to protect herself from extortion and assault because a girl can be a target easily. My mom encourages my brother to go out but she is always worried about me when I want to go out alone. I'm planning world traveling in the future so I want more freedom.

   In addition, a girl should care about her appearance.

People think girl’s makeup and clothes are expression of manners. Sometimes these make me feel tired. After I graduate schools and go out into the world, I’ll have to care about these, too. However, a boy doesn’t have to think about them a lot.

   For these reasons, I would be a boy, if I were to be born again.