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I Im 26 years old. I ve got no idea whether my age is young or not, but it does not matter for me.

I wanna always act like children even after 10years or more. my freiends, ofcourse not all, usually

go expensive restruant, beer bar, and they would go back home if they are more than enugh drunken.

but in my case I love sitting in chiar of park talking about foot ball or some butifulwomen we ve met

with my friend. drinking chea can coffee or beer make us happy. there is no point being to any beer bar.

I have very good solution to our problum. my solution is about having a happy life.

you shuld ask yourself that 'are you happy?' and what is your answer? do you get a answer

to my qusition? if your answer is 'yes'. you should keep going, but your answer is 'no'

you should change somthing for your life